Friday, 2 December 2016

LO3- feedback from Nick Bax

Pitch Feedback
The feedback from Nick Bax helped me extremely a she said that I could see if I would open up for some of the colours also he said that I could change the design of the logo as my design is very simple. He said he loved the genre idea and the locations I have included he said that he liked the way I thought of the name and see if I could change the t-shirt designs a little by adding a wider variety of colours.

Another point he told me was that he liked the fact that my target audience was very wide  as I was aiming for the correct target audience.

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